Sonntag, 2. März 2008

I don't tell a story


1 I want to tell a story, but nothing happens.

2 I wrote a story, but it became all wrong.

3 Don't you ever get tired of your own story?

4 If you don't write it down at once, it will never come back.

6 Kommentare:

redredday hat gesagt…

hi Hineshm, thank you for your comment! always happy to see a new visitor, too.
i really like what you wrote here (good thing for me it is in english :). you pinpoint so perfectly the situation, and in the right order too. can totally identify with each one of them. i gave a big "YEah to #3 and also think others must be tired of it too. my boyfriend and i cut each other off with a loud "HEard it!" when the other person forgets and starts to tell the same story over again. ahah.
love how you wrote #2.

Hineshm hat gesagt…

Hi redredday, I was lucky that I wrote something in English then! Glad you came to visit...

Ursula Achten hat gesagt…

Mien hat mich hier hergelockt und ich werde wiederkommen!!!
Bayrische Wörtebücher und Orangeneis in Orangen und dein wunderbares Motto (Fernando Pessoa)...da muss ich noch ein wenig mehr Lesen!!

Hineshm hat gesagt…

Wow, Uschi, ich freu mich über deinen Besuch! Und: Ich liebe Papier, in allen seinen Erscheinungsformen und Beschaffenheiten!

redredday hat gesagt…

yes, i agree!!! actually, i have no idea what you guys are saying. but got the gist of it from all the exclamation marks and a somewhat off-key babel fish translation. ;).

btw, what does herzbuckelweg mean?

Hineshm hat gesagt…

"Herzbuckelweg" comes from a poem of Paul Celan, it is called "La Contrescarpe". Could the translation be "Heartbumproad"?

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